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[FIC - Kakashi/Iruka] Room-mate - Chapter 17

March 24th, 2007 (12:38 am)
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WARNING: LEMON AHEAD: DO NOT READ IF YOU ARE OFFENDED BY MALE/MALE MATERIAL!

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Room-mate - lemon-cut version - Chapter 17 

Iruka remained lying on the bed on his back till Kakashi returned with soft plastic based ropes in hand, pulling the duvet to one side towards the head board of the bed. Kakashi dangled it in front of Iruka's face, his other hand reaching down to push the shirt up. Iruka tugged the shirt off and tossed it behind his head on the floor. He allowed Kakashi to stare all he wanted, noting how the mismatched eyes lingered on the jewelry he donned. Iruka eyed the simple metal framed bed and shifted so that he was lying with the footboard behind his head. He raised his arms, closing his eyes as Kakashi tied his wrists to the foot of the bed, the ropes long enough for Iruka to tug a bit but not enough for Iruka to touch any part of his own body.

A shuddering breath escaped Iruka's lips as his nervousness elevated when Kakashi started to tug his pants down. Kakashi leaned forward once Iruka heard his jeans drop to the ground, lips claiming Iruka's once more. Iruka closed his eyes, forcing himself to relax despite his visible nervousness.

"Scared?" Kakashi asked, lips brushing against his as he spoke.

"Yes."

"Why?"

Iruka swallowed thickly and kept his eyes clothes. "I don't know."

"Don't be. Pain and pleasure can make you forget everything." Kakashi said, voice promising exactly what he just said.

"What are you going to do?" Iruka asked, watching as Kakashi leaned back on his heels and pulled something out of his pocket, dangling three metallic rings over Iruka's nose. Iruka recognized it and his eyes widened, the sight of the sexual device heating up his belly. "W-Wha -"

"I didn't think you'd show up. But I planned this just in case you did. Had to go get stuff just for you." Kakashi said. Iruka watched as Kakashi's eyes trailed down his belly and towards the waistband of his blue boxers. Iruka tried to keep himself from arching up when Kakashi started drawing light circles over his waistband.

Iruka's mind started to turn into an uncomprehending organ and he found himself whimpering without control. "P-Please, no ..."

Kakashi's smirk filled the room as he tugged the boxers down, cupping Iruka's twitching desire and slipping the device on. Iruka gritted his teeth and arched when Kakashi had to squeeze a bit too hard without the help of lube to get the device in its proper place, making Iruka bite his lower lip to stop the agonizing scream from escaping his mouth; Iruka never thought that a day would come when he will be wearing a triple-ring cock-ring. The cool metallic feel made Iruka buckle under Kakashi's towering shadow, a groan tearing itself involuntarily out of his throat.

"You know, that thing has your name engraved on it. Customized." Kakashi said, kneeling down to kiss the slightly red testicles from his harsh squeeze earlier. The kiss only made Iruka grow harder. "Ready for more?"

"N-No ... Ka-Ka-Kashi ..." Iruka blabbered, turning his head to one side, completely forgetting that he was lying naked in front of a man he once thought was insane. Then again, with the way Kakashi was speaking, he could have been insane; Iruka was enjoying it. "Y-You c-can't ..."

"Funny how you keep saying no and no." Kakashi chuckled leaning over to nibble on the jewelry on Iruka's navel. "Should I take my shirt off, Iruka?"

Iruka turned his lust glazed eyes over at Kakashi, tugging as the ropes that bound him so that he can pull Kakashi down to kiss him and shut the yapping trap up. "K-Kiss ..."

"I don't think you're in any position to demand right now." Kakashi smirked and got off the bed. Iruka groaned loudly and whimpered like a deprived man when the heat of Kakashi's body disappeared. He felt something dropping on the bed but he couldn't see what it was. Kakashi leaned over him and kissed one of his collar bones, teasingly leaving a short lick-trail and making Iruka's arousal harden even more. "Take my shirt off?"

"Kashi..."

"You're not answering the question."

Iruka forced himself to peel his eyes open and found Kakashi looming over him, looking devilishly handsome in the dim light. Iruka briefly wondered if it was possible to fall in love with a person with a cocky smirk on their face. "Y-Yes! Please!"

Iruka also wondered how he was reduced to begging in such a short time.

Kakashi did take his shirt off, tossing it somewhere on the floor before he uncapped a tube of lubricant. "I am going to play with your body, 'Ruka. And I'm going to make you feel good. I haven't had dessert yet."

Iruka briefly caught sight of the purple colored liquid spilling over Kakashi's fingers. Iruka turned his head away, feeling rather pathetic in his helpless position with Kakashi looming over him and fussing over something he couldn't really see. He felt the cool gel drop over his straining manhood and it made him bite his lower lip once more. The gel heated up against his already hot and begging member, making him whine like a needy virgin. He kept his eyes squeezed tight, not wanting Kakashi to see the helplessness that he was sure was mirrored in his eyes.

"K-Kashi ..."

"Look at me, 'Ruka." Kakashi said, his breath against Iruka's cheek. Iruka shook his head and immediately got bitten on the jaw for refusing. "Look at me!"

Iruka shuddered and complied, breath hitching as he opened his eyes and slowly turned his head up, looking up at Kakashi. He could see the thick layer of lust and want in Kakashi's face, barely restrained by patience and will power. "W-What -"

Iruka forgot his sentence as he opened his mouth to a silent and pained scream as something large, cold and slick as forcefully pushed up his puckered and unprepared entrance. Kakashi's face wavered in front of him till the painful stretching sensation disappeared. Iruka felt something filling him and something tugging that very thing that was in him. He managed to gather enough of his wits to look up at Kakashi and attempted to glare when another large and round object was pushed in. This time, Iruka managed to cry out a bit, feeling horribly ashamed as his legs forced themselves to close in an attempt to stop the unappreciated invasion.

A large and slick hand held one of his legs in place by the thighs, a finger caressing the inner region gently in an attempt to comfort him. Iruka arched away, savagely pulling against the ropes that dug in to his wrists like hot wire as the process repeated itself over and over again until he felt something in him shudder. Iruka gasped, eyes staring widely at the ceiling as his backside felt extremely full and stretched.

"You're really, really good 'Ruka. You took all five in." Kakashi whispered, hands reaching for something beside Iruka's leg as a popping noise echoed in the room. "We just started and you've eagerly taken in five beads. I'm impressed."

Iruka took several minutes to understand what Kakashi was saying as cool sticky liquid started to coat his stomach. The smell of chocolate and syrup tickled his nose as his wits managed to finally form words. "B-Beads? W-What b-beads?"

Kakashi pushed the half empty bottle of syrup over the bed and held up a string for Iruka to see. Iruka saw how the colored plastic string was connected to the anal beads Kakashi managed to push into him. They weren't small from what he could feel and it's been a while since he indulged in anything anal-related. Iruka couldn't help but feel that Kakashi was treating him harshly.

Kakashi dropped the string on the mattress and tucked Iruka's thighs under his arms, his chest pushing Iruka's throbbing erection against his navel, going unnoticed. The contact made Iruka squirm and arch upwards, lips parting to suck in heavy, panting breaths as Kakashi started to lick the chocolate syrup he smothered Iruka's chest with. Iruka lost his ability to think once more at that moment as Kakashi rocking chest rubbed against his manhood, the hold of the rings sending waves of pleasure shooting up Iruka's spine and directly to his brain. He struggled with futile effort against the ropes as Kakashi licked his chest clean, tongue dipping in to his navel and sucking on the round jewelry before trailing up and nibbling on the nipple that donned the piercing gently with his teeth, all the while cleaning up any chocolate trails he left behind. The sensation made Iruka ejaculate prematurely, the hold of the rings and the painful feeling of being too full and not stretched enough helping the process of pushing his poor release out.

Iruka whimpered and thrashed till Kakashi made a disapproving sound and grasped his semi-soft manhood with his sticky hands. "Hey, come on. Don't be like that."

"C-Can't - I - I need you t-to -"

"Later." Kakashi said firmly and started pulling at the string that connected the beads together. Iruka whimpered in pain as the beads were eased out one by one till it was all out. He sank heavily against the mattress, hands lying limp over his head and against the metal railing of the footboard, legs apart and breath coming out fast and uneven.

Iruka was about to relax and collect his wits once more when Kakashi's finger started caressing his entrance again, smearing a good amount of cold and scented lubricant over the puckered flesh. Iruka shut his eyes once more, feeling a finger probe and wiggle inside of him. He gasped and subconsciously pushed down against the finger, wanting to feel more of it.

"N-Not f-fair ..."

"Like that?" Kakashi asked, kissing Iruka's knee and rubbing his inner thigh with his free hand, gently massaging the firm yet tender flesh, forcing the blood back to Iruka's arousal. With each second, Iruka's manhood hardened and when it was straight and rigid enough, Kakashi pulled his finger out. "Good word, baby." Kakashi whispered, trailing kisses from Iruka's knee to his inner thigh. "Now, no matter what you do, don't scream."

Iruka didn't have time to understand the apparent order as he felt something larger push in to his lubricated entrance, making him grit his teeth and finally scream out from the inconsiderate force Kakashi used to shove what felt like an entire water pipe up his entrance. Tears involuntarily came up to Iruka's eyes, dripping down his temples and on the green sheets. He bit his lower lip, aggravating the cut that was already there beforehand and re-opening the already dried wound. He shivered from the pain blinding him, shaking his head from side to side.

"P-Please! N-No more!" Iruka begged and Kakashi silenced him by kissing him fully on the lips, licking his bleeding lips clean. Iruka heard a light click before vibrating sounds filled the room and the thing inside him wiggled and made him arch up. His feet dug in to the green bed spread, lips breaking the kiss as he screamed out at the movement going on inside of him, feet pushing downwards so that he could get away from the sensation overwhelming him.

Kakashi straddled him then, pinning him on the bed and pushing his hips down the mattress, making the phallic shaped dildo inside him push against the his spine, causing pleasure and extreme pain to mingle and render him immobile for several long minutes as his cock dripped with newly pumped out semen. Iruka shivered helplessly, legs wide apart and Kakashi's heavy weight on his hips.

"Beautiful." Kakashi whispered, raining kisses all over Iruka's body and sucking on his nipple as the vibrator continued to move inside of him. Kakashi clamped his teeth over Iruka's nipple, his finger tugging on the jewelry on the other side as he bit hard, forcing a scream out of Iruka till it died down from the raw feeling that pooled at the pit of Iruka's throat. "Baby, you're so beautiful."

Iruka's words hitched painfully in his throat, head lolling to one side as he tried to tug against the ropes once more. "N-No ... please ... I - I c-can't ..."

"You're going to love this." Kakashi said, reaching down and increasing the vibration of the device inside of Iruka. Iruka squirmed until Kakashi grasped his length, squeezing and allowing his thumb to caress the slit of Iruka's head. "You came hard last time. Can you come just as hard now? Can you come harder for me, Iruka?"

Iruka grasped the rope extensions, knuckles turning white as Kakashi's eyes bore in to his body and his hand stroked his length. The hand job was irregular, sloppy and very distracted. Iruka could feel Kakashi's hardness against his stomach as the man continued to stroke him up and down, pinching the skin at the bottom of his balls hard enough for Iruka to scream again before pulling at his length a few times till Iruka couldn't hold it back.

The orgasm was lacking and incomplete but it removed the weight of the torture somewhat. Iruka felt his cock soften up a bit in Kakashi's hands as he lay still, watching the ceiling with a blank gaze and rosy parted lips. Kakashi wasn't moving on top of him for a long while, the sound of the constant vibration and their heavy breaths the only sounds filling the room. Iruka's calves and thighs remained tensed from the continuous vibration; a click sounded off and the vibration stopped. Iruka found his shoulders relaxing and the knots in his legs come lose. His cock was somehow hardening from the few short minutes of the continuous vibration but not hard enough.

Kakashi eased the vibrator out of Iruka gently, placing it on the bed and pushing it away till it landed with a thump on the floor. Iruka relaxed a bit, getting more air in to his lungs as Kakashi started to lick the traces of his release clean. The hot tongue brushing up wetly and hotly against his awakening manhood made Iruka give out a throaty whine. Kakashi's hands pushed his thighs further apart, licking every single white drop off the tanned skin in agonizing slowness till nothing was left and Iruka was hard again.

Iruka watched Kakashi through lowered lashes as Kakashi pushed his pants and boxers all the way off, leaning forward to undo the ropes on Iruka's wrist. Iruka remained confused and wondering as his hands fell limply on the bed, red and bruised from all the pulling. Kakashi tossed the ropes aside and started to kiss Iruka deeply. Iruka opened his mouth willingly, mustering enough strength in his numb arms to pull them up and wrap them around Kakashi's neck as he kissed the man back with all the passion that was cooped up in him.

Kakashi shifted so that their manhoods were pressed together and while maintaining their kiss, started to rotate his hips. Iruka could only gasp in to the kiss, fingers digging in to the Kakashi's neck as his nails left half-moon marks on the pale skin. Kakashi started to loose focus on the kiss as their arousals rubbed against each other, sending friction up their spine that blinded them both; soon it was only their gritting teeth pressed against each other till Kakashi pried his mouth open and came with a restrained groan, as Iruka raked his fingers down Kakashi's back, arching up as he came as well.

Kakashi managed to collapse on his side beside Iruka, stomach stained in white. Iruka felt the hot splatters on his chest and stomach start to cool off as he stared at the ceiling, panting again. He glanced at Kakashi several minutes later, cock semi-hard and libido still thirsty for more. Kakashi sat up and threw his legs over the edge of the bed, keeping his back to Iruka.

"A-Are you d-done?" Iruka asked, surprised at the lack of pleasure. While every nerve in his body was still singing, his desire wasn't quenched.

"You can't take anymore. You're bleeding." Kakashi said, shoulder shuddering in the dim room as he sucked in a shaky breath.

Iruka groaned and pushed himself off the bed. He really couldn't move. His entire body felt like lead and a glance at the sheets between his legs told him that he was indeed bleeding a little bit. Chocolate, blood and semen mixed on the sheets; Iruka glanced to the side of the bed and noticed the green colored vibrator and anal beads lying discarded on the floor. Kakashi did keep his promise on that fact that he won't be able to move. Shifting his position was an effort on its own. Iruka's hand pressed on something by his knees and he noticed the rather large butt plug remaining unused on the soiled sheets.

What his mind conjured up then scared him, but it was enough to make his body move. "I'm not done. Y-You can't l-leave m-me like this." Iruka said, determination creeping in to his eyes as he forced himself to get on all fours, taking the large butt plug and pushing his face in to the mattress, stretching his arms behind him so that he had the tip of device aimed at his entrance. He couldn't see anything but he knew that he was making one hell of a sight.

Kakashi turned to find him preparing himself, without lube and erection hanging mid air as Iruka pushed the inflatable device all the way in, screaming in to the sheets as he did so. A glance from underneath his lashes told him that he had Kakashi right where he wanted him; he was stupefied and aroused on the bed.

Iruka had to muster up all the flexibility he could find, tugging at the small pump and grasping it between his two hands.

"I-Iruka! Y - You -"

Iruka pressed his cheek on the mattress, facing Kakashi and raised his hips higher up in the air, hands squeezing down the small pump as he inflated the device inside him. The self inflicted pleasure blinded him and stretched him at the same time. "Oh - Oh gods! Kashi! I - I - oh gods!" Iruka squeezed the pump without thinking and screamed Kakashi's name out when he felt something inside him being caressed that sent a blinding pleasure up his spine, killing the pain on its way. Iruka started moving his hips in a manner that had Kakashi staring at him hungrily and predator like. "I'm going to fucking come! I swear I -"

Kakashi tugged the pump out of Iruka's hands, placed a hand on Iruka's butt cheeks and undid the screw on the pump to deflate it. Iruka whimpered at the loss of the pleasure, knees sliding down the mattress till he was lying on his stomach, face pressed firmly on the green sweat soaked sheets as Kakashi slowly eased the device out, dropping it on the floor with the rest.

"You are the very, very definition of sex." Kakashi whispered, kissing the firm cheeks lightly. "Can you sit up, Iruka?"

"Fuck me." Iruka whispered. "No. Wait." Kakashi reached down and gently squeezed enough lubricant over the rings holding Iruka's release imprisoned, easing them out with difficulty that had Iruka crying out in pain. Kakashi tossed it aside when it came free, kissing Iruka gently and apologetically. "Ka-Kashi?"

Kakashi looked down at him. "I'm sorry, baby."

"Make love to me."

Iruka peered from underneath his lashes to find Kakashi's expression pained as he dropped his face on Iruka's shoulders, shoulders shuddering as he wrapped his arms around Iruka in a possessive manner. "Iruka. My beautiful Iruka."

"Make love to me, Kakashi." Iruka repeated, wrapping his arms around the broad back and tightening his hold.

"Can you move?" Kakashi asked, suddenly hesitant.

"Help me." Iruka mumbled, and Kakashi eased him back on all fours, guiding Iruka's hands to the metal railings of the bed's foot board.

"See the mirror, 'Ruka?" Kakashi whispered against Iruka's ear, eyes locked on the mirror across the room. Iruka could see his flushed face and sweat soaked hair that still held his loose and messy ponytail. Kakashi reached up and freed his hair, kissing the top of his head tenderly. "Can you see me?"

"Y-Yes." Iruka said, breathless. Kakashi looked beautiful. In the dim lights, his body contours was accentuated with the shadows, his lips rosy from the kiss and sweat glistening over his pale body. His eyes were thick with desire and his hair hung down in messy spiky clumps that made Iruka want thread his fingers through them and comb them back.

"I'm going to watch you. And you're going to watch me. Ready, baby?"

Iruka swallowed and nodded, eyes strained on the mirror as Kakashi adjusted his hips and lowered his hand to Iruka's backside to guide his hard member in to the waiting entrance. "Please, Kakashi... Hurry..."

From the mirror, Iruka watched as Kakashi gritted his teeth and start to push in. Iruka tilted his head back and his hands gripped the metal bars tightly as Kakashi sheathed himself neatly and easily inside of him. Iruka trembled from the heat, the sensation nothing like he felt earlier. He could feel Kakashi's pulse beat and blood flow inside him. He groaned when Kakashi shifted, causing movement inside him and sent his head back in pleasure, eyes rolling back as his chest and throat stuck out and his fingers go numb from his grip on the metal footboard.

"S-So tight, 'R-Ruka ..." Kakashi hissed, reaching out to press his hands against Iruka's on the railing.

Iruka didn't feel movement for very long moments till his muscles contracted and adjusted to Kakashi's very well endowed length. He never caught sight of the length but judging to how big Kakashi felt compared to the dildo and butt plug, Iruka had no doubt that it was as impressive as it felt.

"M-Move!" Iruka choked out, pushing his hips back and making Kakashi grunt. "P-Please. H-Hurry."

"Baby." Kakashi hissed and rotated his hips once before pulling out. He pushed back in and it jolted Iruka forward with the force, making Iruka scream at the feeling of pleasure setting his body on fire.

"H-Harder!" Iruka growled, looking at the mirror beggingly at Kakashi. "P-Please..."

Kakashi didn't look like he could indulge in further foreplay or teasing. Iruka knew the face he was making on the mirror could make any man or woman sink on their knees and lose control of their senses. He closed his eyes, mouth parting open as Kakashi moved in and out of him, the front of his pelvis making slapping noises against Iruka's backside. Iruka wanted to feel more and not caring whether he tore more of his muscles or not, he pushed down, meeting Kakashi's every thrust with his own, hair swinging back and forth as he was jolted forward with each of Kakashi strong thrusts.

"Baby - Oh gods, baby!" Kakashi groaned, head lolling back as he continued to push against Iruka, hands moving down to hold on to Iruka's waist.

Iruka didn't know that he was calling out Kakashi's name with every thrust, the pattern only being broken with an occasional whimper or cry. "Good ... so ... so ... good! In me ... please ... in me ..."

Hoping that Kakashi would understand, Iruka squeezed his eyes shut as he pushed back hard one last time, the flow of orgasm wracking his entire body as he threw his head forward and screamed. He briefly felt Kakashi move twice inside of him before he felt something hot fill him. He'd like to think that he felt Kakashi's orgasm all the way into his stomach but he couldn't think anymore as his arms shook from the orgasm and he collapsed on the green sheets, panting and staring back at Kakashi with one eye. Kakashi had his head over his shoulder, breath coming out in hot puffs into Iruka's ear.

"B-baby ... my Iruka." Kakashi mumbled, closing his eyes and tiredly lifting his head up and easing his softening erection out of Iruka's entrance, pulling a trail of sticky white with him.

"Kashi ... so ... so good." Iruka whispered, closing his eyes as he allowed Kakashi to man handle him and pull him over, pillowing his damp head over the firm and muscular arm. "I - I can't m-move ..."

Kakashi shifted and toed the duvet over, pulling it over the both of them. "Doesn't matter. I'll hold you ..."

Iruka pressed his forehead against Kakashi's collarbone, barely managing to snake an arm around Kakashi as he felt Kakashi's other hand come to rest on his waist. The cooling effect of orgasm lulled Iruka to sleep, every once in a while, he'd shudder till his tingling nerves finally calmed down. He didn't know whether he fell asleep first or not, but snuggled up against Kakashi, Iruka couldn't bring himself to care.

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Comments

Posted by: ((Anonymous))
Posted at: March 25th, 2007 06:24 am (UTC)
WOW!!

wow that was bloody awesome. i have neer read a great lemon in.....well...weeks!!! that was too good.

Posted by: Katt-zen Madden-ski ([info]kattmad)
Posted at: March 26th, 2007 01:31 am (UTC)
*censored*

Soooo damn hot...I am just wondering exactly how those toys work and where I can get meself some.

and where can I find a pair of men (just as hot) to re-enact this for my viewing pleasure ~.o

Posted by: shi-chan ([info]shi_chan06)
Posted at: March 26th, 2007 09:09 am (UTC)
Re: *censored*

Well, when you do manage to find men just as hot as well as those toys, you holler over the rest of us so we can watch too XD

Glad you liked it *hugs*

Posted by: radical_ed57 ([info]radical_ed57)
Posted at: April 5th, 2007 06:57 am (UTC)
Kyo

That was the best lemon I've ever read! Seriously! Some very interesting mental images came to mind throughout the fic... >XD

Posted by: cutsycat ([info]cutsycat)
Posted at: April 14th, 2007 06:50 am (UTC)

Good Lemon to go with a good story. Can't wait to see more chapters.

P.S. Please add me to your list of friends. I really like the Naruto fanfiction of yours that I've read so far.

Posted by: Stephanie Travellyr ([info]travellyr)
Posted at: April 24th, 2007 05:51 am (UTC)
watch for falling cars

O_O Oh holy FUCK that was hot.

Posted by: winglessgoddess ([info]winglessgoddess)
Posted at: June 1st, 2007 05:02 pm (UTC)

Wow that was amazing you have a real gift for writing lemons

Posted by: keoni_kun ([info]keoni_kun)
Posted at: July 31st, 2007 08:52 pm (UTC)
*dies*

Oh My God. That was hot.
Thanks for sending me the link and shizz *gives cookie* -^__^-

Posted by: brightsun301 ([info]brightsun301)
Posted at: October 1st, 2007 02:40 am (UTC)
Re: *dies*
Wish I Could Prove I Love You

omg so much icon love! bebbe!nins!

Posted by: almighty empress of the universe ([info]watarigarasu_09)
Posted at: December 26th, 2007 11:59 pm (UTC)

uwah!!! *bleeds and frys comp* oh noes!!.....oh well. that was the best lemon ever! =^^= so hawt...

Posted by: alunara_01 ([info]alunara_01)
Posted at: January 17th, 2008 05:50 pm (UTC)

WOW! great lemon i'm so glad you added me to friends because i wouldn't want to have missed this :)

Posted by: artemis ([info]mythras_fire)
Posted at: March 17th, 2008 05:19 am (UTC)

Thanks for adding me :D I'm excited to read this tomorrow night when I get home!

Posted by: cihh ([info]cihh)
Posted at: March 17th, 2008 06:37 pm (UTC)

YOU ARE AMAZING.... *nosebleed*..... you really have done a very good lemons here XDD.. My favorite is kakairu :D

Posted by: artemis ([info]mythras_fire)
Posted at: March 18th, 2008 05:10 am (UTC)
mythra

That was hawt. Iruka had me fooled though, I kept thinking he was going to have another panic attack but then he's all 'more, Kakashi dagnabit!' hehe. The luv-makin' was the bestest part, the sweetest. I guess you could say that they wore each other out. I love this line, and the answer is yes! :P

"Iruka briefly wondered if it was possible to fall in love with a person with a cocky smirk on their face."

Posted by: shi-chan ([info]shi_chan06)
Posted at: March 21st, 2008 02:26 pm (UTC)

LOL. I'm glad you enjoyed that. Half the time I don't even remember exactly WHAT I wrote. The only thing I remembered about RM's lemon scene is that ungodly butt-plug. XD

Posted by: artemis ([info]mythras_fire)
Posted at: March 24th, 2008 03:12 am (UTC)
Kakashi_Iruka

LOL, I don't doubt it, it had my eyes going 0__0 too ;) Definitely got Kakashi's attention though, didn't it :P

Posted by: Maritza ([info]mayoranime)
Posted at: January 4th, 2009 01:54 am (UTC)

where does this part belong to in ur story i know is part of chap 17, but i've been reading ur story on fanfic and i can seem to make it fit within chap 17? can you let me know where it fits?
thanx an d awesome story thx for uploading it and writing it...

Posted by: shi-chan ([info]shi_chan06)
Posted at: January 10th, 2009 09:27 am (UTC)

This scene takes place right after Kakashi says "Let me get those ropes." in chapter 17. I wanted to write the ff.net version as clean as I possibly could (without making things look awkward).

You are welcome :)

Posted by: Lillian ([info]koreanpeach)
Posted at: April 26th, 2009 11:12 am (UTC)

Oh... my... God... *faints*

That was, by far, the most erotic sex scene I have EVER read. And a KakaIru one no less. =D If I wasn't already in a devoted relationship... Hot damn!

I just have to say, I like toys. Toys are good. I'm not usually a fan of the kinky stuff, but sweet Jesus! I've turned a new leaf! You've changed me, and for the better I might add. ;)

Posted by: calla753 ([info]calla753)
Posted at: July 1st, 2009 10:21 am (UTC)
....I'm in love with you o____o

Holy crap. That was so flipping hot! I'm blushing xD
Never read anything with...toys in it(but now imma go look for some) This is a veryvery good first :D

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